I agree with OP that while the result was good, it could've been a lot better.
If the surgeon was more aggresive and wanted to improve her aesthetics as much as possible, he could have suggested a nasion reduction, since hers is pretty shallow. This is more noticeable in profile, where if you didn't know beforehand how her front looked, you would probably think she has a long nose because of how shallow her nasion is which makes her nose appear longer than it is.
Another thing, as another poster already pointed out, is that her jaw looks a little too big and masculine. She would've benefited from having her chin shortened and her jawline shaved down.
Here is what I think the outcome could've been had she undergone the procedures I mentioned above: